So yea, as you probably saw, I posted the new story, what do you guys think? Are the "new" Marcus and Lilith good?Is the format good? The smut removed and unedited chapters placed on my other site? (that being said I won't change that, complying with rules and such) Any ideas for future characters/scenes? I want it mostly to be my plot but I don't mind taking suggestions, getting ideas, mixing things up, etc.
I plan on writing some more soon, taking a little time with it, want to settle on some ideas.
So leave a comment on the chapters if you like it, especially on the unedited chapter's site so I know people are actually reading it. I want